Nice effort put into this on all fronts: story and art. I think it's a good fit for your target audience. I noticed some typos, which can be hard to catch. :) I also ran into an error after the smoking incident, just after the kids yell Dragon!, and I couldn't progress any further.
Hi there! Thank you for your comment and feedback, it's greatly apricated and helps keep this project at a high standards.I have fixed the error, that should be you good to go!
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Nice effort put into this on all fronts: story and art. I think it's a good fit for your target audience. I noticed some typos, which can be hard to catch. :) I also ran into an error after the smoking incident, just after the kids yell Dragon!, and I couldn't progress any further.
Hi there! Thank you for your comment and feedback, it's greatly apricated and helps keep this project at a high standards.I have fixed the error, that should be you good to go!